The night calls
In this dark place
My heart begins to flutter
As I prepare for the dance
Dressed in glitter and gold
I paint my face
A smoke filled room
With neon lights
I hear my name
Close my eyes
I feel you inside
For your song lives in my soul
Your voice guides me
Giving me strength
Confidence
A sense of Peace
Crawling
Sacrificing
Bleeding
Breathe In Me
Walking
Healing
Dancing
Wisdom deep
Like scented tears of incense
I feel the heat
I've been touched
It IS Sacred
So take your precious stones
('Cause it is all I have, to repay you)
And create it.
x
Guns N' Roses ~ Patience
15 comments:
Let it flow through you and interpret as you wish, as I never judge.
Good one A
I visualize being inside an erotic dancer.....As always...XOXOXO
sexy...
i like these lines:
"I hear my name
Close my eyes
I feel you inside
For your song lives in my soul..."
patience... yes...
this is HOT...and I love it..
Thank you Alejandro!!! I really appreciate your kindnes and comments! ;)
Bongo, Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate it. Your vision is correct! Happy Sunday to you!
Melissa, Thank you, thank you! I LOVE your feedback and beautiful words. ;)
Sweepyjean, Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it! ;)
Alpana Jaiswal, HAHAHA!!! Thank you, I LOVE IT!!! ;)
I hadn't quite looked at it from that aspect until I got to the last part of the poem.
Great post! Always enjoy my visits:)
Really like it and I agree with Alpana completely
http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/03/night-of-super-moon-at-vero-beach.html
Thank you Mary as always! I love how you see the deeper meaning. ;)
HAHA!!! Thank you Jim, I double LOVE it!!! ;)
I was surprised that I have already visited this post... but it really feels good that the Spirit has led me back because your posts have more weight now. I am experiencing the 'same'. Although I wish I could dance the song real close :)
You are really extraordinary!
Lots of love Lisa :*
@melissa: PRAISE GOD!!! I love it! Thank you for re-visiting. I'm glad it SPEAKS to you, at this time! Thank you for the BEAUTIFUL compliment, also. xo
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